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Post by Kaisar on Jul 10, 2008 4:40:17 GMT -6
*wince* i just had a chance to go back over my original character for ESWAT. I never realised just how Freaking BAD my typing way back then. just reading it made me want to gouge out my eyeballs just to make the hurting stop. Verity could hear the thoughtd of the other team even on the other sideo f the battle field, the band on her wrist caused her to hacve a headache as he used her power but she blocked hte pain receptors in her mind. feeling everyones impacients she sent out her mind to Som. This had better start son I think chan and Marcus are driving eachother up the wall again and i'm not going to be the one to clean up the mess when chan wipes the floor with himthank god i learnt the value of fluidity, grammer and good spelling. Though my bad typing likes to resuface every now and then. |
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Post by Vector on Jul 10, 2008 4:47:27 GMT -6
XD I feel the same way all the time about my old writing. Even 6 months ago when I made EXADHOS... I want so badly to edit my first post for that now cause I see so many things I dislike in the way I wrote it. But we all get better as we look back. We improve and we move on to write better things. Isn't it just grand? ^_^ p.s.- Yep. You "learnt" a great deal, but it does indeed "resuface" from time to time... You know even Quick Reply has an auto-spell check that underlines things in question, right? o.O p.s.s.- EXADHOS had a [/color] mistake, you called yourself a "he" at one point, and spelled "bowl" as "bowel" twice. Now I'm sure your Aussie accent would make "bowl" a deliciously cute word, but "bowels" are what food lies in AFTER you eat it (intestines!), not BEFORE. *teases Nishy-dragon to no end*  |
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Post by Kaisar on Jul 10, 2008 4:53:31 GMT -6
LMAO thanks for pointing that out. apparently i still have to check the spellcheck of microsoft word with a dictonary to make sure i've got the right meaning ^_^;
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Archangel
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And thus did the Archangel descend from Heaven itself...
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Post by Archangel on Jul 16, 2008 19:39:00 GMT -6
Nishy, I found the same thing! Seriously, I was really surprised when I went back and reread stuff a while ago. Yes, we all seemed to suck at proper grammar and punctuation and capitalization at times. "At times" being a gross misrepresentation of about 80% of all our posts. LOL
The stories were fun, the characters were cool, and we all enjoyed it. But the English language probably grew to despise us.
I'm surprised we weren't slapped upside the head by an anthropomorphic conceptualization of Mother English, a woman who would look part Lady Liberty and part British schoolmarm.
If that had happened, I'd be scared out of my ever-lovin' gourd.
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Post by Kaisar on Jul 17, 2008 0:37:55 GMT -6
hell yes. nice to hear from you again too Arch. *glomps*
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Verity could hear the thoughtd of the other team even on the other sideo f the battle field, the band on her wrist caused her to hacve a headache as he used her power but she blocked hte pain receptors in her mind. feeling everyones impacients she sent out her mind to Som.
